I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hi Manaia, I am Albin from Yaldhurst here. I really liked your blog because it was amazingly arranged and the topic you choose was also amazing. It was quite informative. For improvement you could add more description and more fun facts. Kind Regards Albin.
Kia Ora, My Grace a year 7 student form YMS. I really like this because its really eye catching and it looks really good. I love how good this because it looks like you have put a lot of time.
Maybe next time you maybe add more detail and explain more about it.
This reminded me when I have seen some photos like this.
Hello Manaia, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more. You could also try to Add a more catchy title. But other than that Ka Pai Bridget
Hi Manaia, I am Albin from Yaldhurst here.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog because it was amazingly arranged and the topic you choose was also amazing.
It was quite informative.
For improvement you could add more description and more fun facts.
Kind Regards
Albin.
Hi there Manaia, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! These photos are amazing.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you shared all of your work and showed lots of examples of real and photoshopped.
This reminds me of some really cool photos I have seen before but I couldn't tell if they were real or not.
Next time you could show what you did and not just the photos. You could also point out the differences in the photos.
Have you tried this at all?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteMy Grace a year 7 student form YMS.
I really like this because its really eye catching and it looks really good.
I love how good this because it looks like you have put a lot of time.
Maybe next time you maybe add more detail and explain more about it.
This reminded me when I have seen some photos like this.
But apart from that its great - Grace
Hello Manaia,
ReplyDeleteIt is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more.
You could also try to Add a more catchy title.
But other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget