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Friday, August 16, 2019

last night plans

last last night me my mum and my dad had plans to watch a movie and get some snacks for the movie.
we were watching the new godzilla movie. i was  so excited to watch the new movie

2 comments:

  1. Hi there Manaia, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.

    I like the way you explained what you were doing and when you did it.

    This reminds me of a couple of movies I have seen with my mum.

    Next time you could include capital letters and make your post more eye catching and interesting.

    Did you like the movie?

    Kind regards,
    Abby.

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  2. Hi Manaia my name is Heidi from St Patrick's school in Greymouth.
    It sounds like you had a really good time with your parents watching the movie.Next time you could check your punctuation.
    Good job-Heidi

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