I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hi Manaia. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I think those biscuits will taste really nice. I think you should include the recipe. Thanks for sharing what you did.
Hey Manaia, my name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. Wow that must of been very cool to make. That would of been fun to do it at school. Maybe you could write a bit more, like why you were making them? You could even add the recipe in!
Also next time remember to use capital letters at the start of your sentences and also use capital 'I'. I'm not sure if you or anyone took photos of you making it but if you did I would differently be interested seeing them and I'm sure other people would too. But apart from that well done!
Hi Manaia. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I think those biscuits will taste really nice. I think you should include the recipe. Thanks for sharing what you did.
ReplyDeleteHey Manaia, my name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. Wow that must of been very cool to make. That would of been fun to do it at school. Maybe you could write a bit more, like why you were making them? You could even add the recipe in!
ReplyDeleteAlso next time remember to use capital letters at the start of your sentences and also use capital 'I'.
I'm not sure if you or anyone took photos of you making it but if you did I would differently be interested seeing them and I'm sure other people would too. But apart from that well done!
Kind regards
- Chloe